Expert editing for medical, dental, and pharmacy school applicants.

The Rejuvenation package is ideal for the essay writer desiring a more interactive editing and revision process.

Ø     Returned within 3 days of payment confirmation.
Ø     Free follow-up proofreading returned within 36 hours of receipt of second draft.

Price:$199  

  The Rejuvenation Package

The goal of the Rejuvenation package is to critique your essay through the eyes of an admissions committee and suggest changes that will make you a more marketable candidate. The Rejuvenation package includes the services of the Polishing package, plus extensive in-text editing suggestions regarding the essay’s style, tone, vividness, and appropriateness. The aim of the Rejuvenation package is to help you produce an essay that is not only technically sound, but also elegant, compelling, and persuasive. Our Rejuvenation package focuses on the following: 

• Proofreading: Please see description for the Polishing package.
• Sentence-level editing: We will suggest changes aimed at producing a more stylish essay at the sentence-level. We pay particular attention to the most common (and infuriating) writing pitfalls—passive voice, weak verbs, redundancy, legalese, wordiness, confusing sentence structure, logical gaps, inappropriate slang or jargon, connotative word choice, and imprecise language.
• Paragraph-level editing: This service identifies problems associated with paragraph length, topic sentences, transitions, and flow.
• Structural editing: Our writing experts will pinpoint weaknesses in the essay’s overall organization and structure. Suggestions may include: rearranging sections/paragraphs to achieve a more logical progression of ideas, cutting and/or expanding sections based on their relevance and potential to incite reader interest, and inserting proper transitional cues to signal movement between ideas.
• Audience-level editing: We carefully analyze your essay’s persuasive power and then offer concrete suggestions for making it more appealing to an admissions committee. This service includes: ensuring that the essay appropriately addresses the prompt, considering the essay’s overall presentation of you as an individual, identifying potential “red-flag” comments or content that can interfere with a committee’s estimation of your desirability, and suggesting possibilities for boosting your self-presentation.
• Final Proofreading: You are encouraged to take advantage of one free follow-up proofreading of your revised essay.
• Editor’s Letter: The Rejuvenation package also includes a substantial written evaluation of your essay’s overall effectiveness as well as specific suggestions for crafting a more competitive essay.

Your first round of editing will be returned within 3 days of payment confirmation.
Your follow-up proofreading will be returned within 36 hours of receipt of second draft.

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